Dark clouds hung in the overcast sky lolling about refusing to budge from its position.The buildings stood waiting in apprehension for impending disaster.There was a flash of lightning it was anywhere and everywhere,followed up with a hearty "boom" of thunder.Electricity filled the humid air.
Is this a story where there will be a natural disaster going to happen? The dark clouds and the booming thunder makes me think that either a typhoon or tornado is going to happen. The impending disaster also makes me think that the people are ready for the disaster and are not afraid and have already found safety in a shelter.
ReplyDeleteI think your story could be about an unexpected disaster involving thunder. It could be something caused by global warming, from there you could use that to warn people about global warming.
ReplyDeleteI was planning on writing a detective based story where people were just murdered or robbed or there was an arsonist
ReplyDeleteWow, i didn't expect that, I thought that this was a story about the supernatural events occurring and how this could be traced to the wrath of the Thundergod Zeus.
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